Wednesday, May 16, 2012

Forbidden Pleasures, Forgiven Desires by Eliot Hastings

Peter is a natural submissive and masochist.  He’s yet to find the one that can truly fulfill what he needs. Suzy is a sadist who has never found a man who can accept her for what she is.  When these two meet and finally come together, it’s a perfect match. Finally Suzy can be her true self. Peter happily surrenders entirely to her.  His sole purpose it to please her and be used by her.

I’m sorry to say just didn’t do it for me.  The dialogue was off to me  and it sometimes felt forced. It was a bit confusing at times too.  One minute you are reading from Suzy's POV, the next it switches to Peter and you don't realize it till the end of a sentence.  There was so much repetition in the story.  Practically the same exact sentence would be repeated in the next paragraph.  There was plenty of sadistic kink.  It had sex too, but didn't really go into detail.  I just didn’t feel the heat.

1 comment:

Maria D. said...

Sounds as if this book could have used more editing and a consistent POV. Thanks for sharing.


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