Jack Gordon is a highly successful real estate agent, a
womanizing man whore and a repressed but it’s like he can’t stop himself from
being that way. Jack slowly lets his
repressed Dominate side out with Sarah but quickly stores it away again because he was hurt badly by the woman he loved in his past
and hasn’t wanted to explore that side of himself in a long time. Jack keeps screwing things up even after he
tells Sarah he wants more and that he is falling for her too. Sarah finally walks away after Jack is caught
in a compromising situation after he says that Dominate. Sarah Thornton is an up and coming yet
already highly successful real estate agent for the same company as Jack. Sarah has recently been burned by a client
who was engaged to another woman and basically begins to concentrate completely
on her job as a real estate agent. Jack
and Sarah end up working on a sale together, Jack for the seller and Sarah for
the buyer, which leads to Jack and Sarah hooking up even though she is aware of
his womanizing ways. Emails, phone calls
and text messages from Jack are usually a combination of work and personal
which are almost always sexual related. Sarah
attempts to keep her emotions out of the equation but begins to fall in love
with Jack. Jack is a typical asshole
after he is done messing with Sarah she can trust him. Jack finally steps up with the grand gesture
but it might just be too late for their relationship.
When I started this book I thought that Jack would be more
Dominate towards Sarah and use that side of him to earn her submission, but
that wasn’t the case at all. I think I
would have liked the story better if she either didn’t even bring BDSM into the
storyline or actually made the story a BDSM one. In my opinion her barely touching on the
subject took away from Jack and Sarah’s relationship. It was almost like she couldn’t decide
whether or not to use BDSM in the story but wanted it there too. Also the side characters could have had more
elaboration. I am hoping that the second
book will expand more on everyone’s stories and that Jack will stop acting like
a kid in the candy store and get his act together but I have my doubts. I like bad boy characters who have pasts but
Jack’s constant man whoring got on my nerves, either settle down or don’t but
if you aren’t going to stop then let Sarah go.
Sarah needed to stand her ground with him too. I am going to keep an open mind when I start
the second book in this series that the author will mesh everything and it will
be an even better book than this one.
3 comments:
Well written review. Thanks for sharing.
Would be cool if Jack had not only womanizing qualities but something we'd like about him. Suspence. And we want them to get together.
Keep reading..... the story gets better and you really start to understand Jack and Sara!!!
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